Monday, September 24, 2012

Working On



"Their Eyes Were Watching God" Essay Advice/Things to Work On:
I need to work on the formatting of my essay by using MLA format. I need to work on careless errors for example spelling and making sure to include the page numbers. In one part of my essay, I made the transition from one topic to the next too fast. Other than these errors, my essay flowed smoothly and I had something to say that was beyond the ordinary. 

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